A Review of Portfolio Re-design by Dan Vos

General Design

  • Dan Vos

    Dan Vos

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    • Design: 3
    • Purpose: 3
    • Originality: 3
    • Engagement: 3
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    General Design

    Posted on Apr 02, 2010 at 11:23 AM

    Alan,

    You've done a nice job of displaying your creative side with this design. I would just cut back a little bit on it. As mentioned previously, I would leave the drawn edges for some elements but not for everything.

    For example, I would remove it from the navigation and use buttons instead.

    Who are you trying to market here with this kind of design?Because right now I get a feeling that a business looking for a professional layout would pass on you based on your design here.