A Review of A Greener Refill eCommerce Website by Rachel Tublitz

homepage main image- I can't see the 'e' in recycle. Intentional but not working. Looks odd.

  • Rachel Tublitz

    Rachel Tublitz

    Rank: 6 Apprentice

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    • Design: 4
    • Purpose: 5
    • Originality: 4
    • Engagement: 4
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    In general, LOVE this! Fantastic design and concept. A few things:

    1. your second page 'environmental benefits'--- the area where you've got icons and then text to the right of them--- the text blocks don't really balance with eachother. Some have a few words, some are three lines, you've got a single hanging word on the second one...a little off balance.

    2. LOVE the ink splatter and color scheme in general. Also I really like how you've got the green boxes jumping out with a 3d-ish effect to them- very nice.

    3. Ink splats great everywhere except on homepage for recycling symbol---- it makes sense to have them for 'shop online' and other areas that you want to draw attention to with the orangish ink splt--- also makes sense for the cmyk page but on the recycling sign?? seems off, doesn't make sense why it's there.