A Review of bludeezyns - website by Rachel Tublitz

switch the top section(the one with the 'hello I'm dan...') with middle section(portfolio)

  • Rachel Tublitz

    Rachel Tublitz

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    My eye goes straight to the middle of the page where it looks like you're going to have images..

    1. I don't understand the blue highlighted text- is it click-able? Or just design element? If just design element, I'd re-think that as it makes me wonder why you're highlighting it and I'm used to being able to interact or go somewhere from highlighted text.

    2. Visual Hierarchy- you're missing some here---- is portfolio equally important to 'contact me' ? If not, I'd think about re-sizing certain areas- at the moment I have three distinctly separate areas of content (top with text, portfolio, and contact) competing for my attention. Yet none stands out really, and I don't feel like I understand where it is you want me to focus my attention.

    3. I like the rectangular style of your portfolio nav and display. In fact the whole site sems to work nicely with rectangular edges...so then I wonder why do you have curved edges on the form fields? Doesn't fit with rest of site.