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i like the adjustments you've made so far~ this is looking completely appropriate for it's purpose. i would say the girl's face is really red & saturated, my screens here are good indicators of color & saturation, i took a screen shot into photoshop and brought her saturation down and it looked good between -30 & -50 from what she's at now.
the logo area might have too much green now.. maybe try making "Teeth whitening" gray..
the 3 products boxes.. the images seem like they will be ity-bity.. maybe you could show one at a time, allowing more space for each to be featured well.
you're moving in the right direction~ good work :)
