A Review of Avantgarde.fi by Mohamed Ghazal

First I'd like to say that I agree with miranda sehl, I like the colors and the composition, but when I first saw it, I think think hair salon. Maybe try pictures with more fludity and maybe a bit of a darker color composition. Also you might want to try something other than the spashes, I dont think they serve any purpose here. and last, try different fonts, maybe san-serifs.

Good start!!....keep it up!