A Review of Avantgarde.fi by Miranda Sehl

make-up powder/spatter

  • Miranda Sehl

    Miranda Sehl

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    • Design: 4
    • Purpose: 4
    • Originality: 5
    • Engagement: 5
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    make-up powder/spatter

    Posted on Mar 24, 2010 at 1:10 PM

    I really enjoy the overlapping boxes behind the text. the spatter effect is making me think more of makeup than hair. ...and this girl's hair doesn't really look great also her necklace is a bit distracting.

    I think that the look will appeal to young girls. I would say that it does look: 'now' ...so good job :) i suggest finding a new picture & effect though for the background.

    • you have two different styles of the "avant garde" which is the logo? maybe you need to finalize that and stick to one on this page. i do really like your style, nice work~
    • Miro
      Miro commented:
      Posted: on Mar 24, 2010 at 1:46 PM

      Thank you, Miranda!!! The girl will change as this is chosen by me and the client will have to choose one that has a proper hair cut (I don´t know a thing about that, I am bald ;-D).

      Logo-Avantgarde is the one close to the menu. I thought overall not to go with the style that the logo has, and the client is also happy with that. But maybe I should break the another Avantgarde more in pieces, so it wouldn´t interfere with the Logo-Avantgarde.

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