• Kirill Kedrinski

    Kirill Kedrinski

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    • Originality: 4
    • Engagement: 4
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    Posted on Mar 21, 2010 at 11:58 PM

    I like it at all. I like header - its original. I like bird, but i think that site is too simple. You`ve started from creative and fresh concept but did not save this mood till the end.

    like russians said: you`ve started with health but finished with death))

    I think you should add more details and fresh tips. smaller thumbnails some text maybe or other content and something more interesting in footer - for example try to continue color theme in lines trough all site long. try to make background in colors of header but not so bright and finish it with bright colors again in footer. Sorry for my english but i hope you understand me))

    • Joe Mulberry
      Joe Mulberry commented:
      Posted: on Mar 22, 2010 at 7:37 AM

      I have just uploaded a new darker version, what do you think? Am I still finishing with death>?

    • Kirill Kedrinski
      Kirill Kedrinski commented:
      Posted: on Mar 22, 2010 at 7:40 AM

      No)) Its better but still i think that pictures are too big)) what do you think if try to make it whiter? and use my idea with continuing lines?

    • Joe Mulberry
      Joe Mulberry commented:
      Posted: on Mar 22, 2010 at 7:49 AM

      I tried it with different opacity and shades but it just didn't look right.... i supplied a subtle grid that i couldn't keep to. I will have a try with smaller images