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Hi Code Dude.
How about using a picture of a side view with someone having a paper shuved in their face or their computer screen lit up.
For the type on this. I would bring in the letter "i" closer to the "n" in Real Stinkers". Also I would bring the 't in the word "don't" closer to the letter "n" (in your title).
I would consider maybe using red associated with stop for your titles and "orange items.
I would consider bringing the sentences closer to each other (the leading).
Best of luck on this letter, sounds good.
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Amy Feger commented:Hi Code Dude,
I just meant the space between the lines. So, here is another perspective: If you squint your eyes and then look, you see lines going across the page. These lines are in a way stacked on one another. Right now the lines are far from each other. yet, the lines would read easier to the viewer if they were closer to each other. The space between the lines is called the leading.
So, I was suggesting that if the leading was brought in a bit it would read better.
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This is intended to more of a straight forward "letter-ish" style website. I don't think a picture of a person would fit nicely in there.
I agree with you about the type. I'm not sure what happened with the spacing.
-Do you want the paragraph closer vertically? Or do you mean the letter-spacing?
Thanks for the review!