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Hi Chris,
After linking to the presented site, I just have a few suggestions.
The right side of this presented guy's hair needs to be photoshoped more. To erase the white edge on it. I think it would look a lot better if he had a shadow fitting behind him corresponding to the light direction hitting him and his size as it changes from page to page.
The typeface being white on a light background makes the type really hard to read in some areas. So either by changing the color of the typeface or to make the background darker.
The "little "e" is lost as far as legibility goes on all pages. Such as in the word "Theater" and "lovebird". This can be solved by either upping the size of the typeface or choosing a more ledgible one.
I would also left align the title "Chris McGarry" to the typefaces blocks below it. As well as "New Album and the..." to the left alignment of "Sample Tracks" below it.
To stay consistent I would change "About The Album" to just the single word "Album" as a linking word by "home","biography", "photos" "contact".
I think it is fun how he stays the same yet, shifts differently from page to page. Great concept!
