A Review of pFusion Logo by Emmanuel Marot

Nice idea, but start over

  • Emmanuel Marot

    Emmanuel Marot

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    Nice idea, but start over

    Posted on Mar 18, 2010 at 11:45 AM

    The colors twirls are too complex, and the 'fu' doesn't mix too well, IMHO.

    I'd start over, as the idea of simple, linked letter is great, but you could do much better. If I were you, I'd start with the simplest form: what if you can only embroider it on a small, low-quality tag and in 1 color?

    PS: keep the '.' on the 'i', as it makes reading much easier.

    • Ezequiel Jaime
      Ezequiel Jaime commented:
      Posted: on Mar 18, 2010 at 1:58 PM

      Thanks for your feedback, but there is't much time to start over. What do you think about the very last update?

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    • Emmanuel Marot
      Emmanuel Marot commented:
      Posted: on Mar 18, 2010 at 2:02 PM

      It's better with less swirls, but I'm not fan of them. Did you try to work at a much smaller size and see what stands out? If you had to scribble it on a stamp, what would you keep?

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