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I agree on the curlys. In practical technical terms the swirls might not be easiest to reproduce. eg. embroider, 1 color printing, etc. I love the clean font choice so how about playing more with it? Maybe try a version where you "fuse" the letters with each other more. I like the swirls' color choice on the first one. I'd use the same colors for variations of the logo such as "pfusion winter collection" in blue, etc.

Hi! I appreciate your feedback, thanks. New version, less swirls.