A Review of pFusion Logo by Jaz Brooks

Like others have said, the coloured swirls bother me. Have you tried scaling it down and seeing how it would look small on a business card for example? Or a clothing label?

You could always move the colours onto the letters themselves, vector them somehow, or have less of them.

I do like the typeface though, and enjoy how the letters join together. Keep going, I think you're getting there.