A Review of pFusion Logo by Jon Spooner

too much swirli-ness

  • Jon Spooner

    Jon Spooner

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    too much swirli-ness

    Posted on Mar 18, 2010 at 8:40 AM

    I get where you are going with the swirls but with 4 swirls it overtakes the whole logo!

    maybe try two swirls "fusing" together in the u and removing the other 3 swirls.

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    • Ezequiel Jaime
      Ezequiel Jaime commented:
      Posted: on Mar 18, 2010 at 9:43 AM

      I liked your feedback! Please check last update.

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    • Jon Spooner
      Jon Spooner commented:
      Posted: on Mar 18, 2010 at 11:06 AM

      excellent! yeah the reworking of the 'p' is nice as well.

      but now without the dot on the 'i' the s+i look like a cursive 'r' :) I know - you can't win!

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    • Ezequiel Jaime
      Ezequiel Jaime commented:
      Posted: on Mar 18, 2010 at 1:55 PM

      New update!

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