A Review of pFusion Logo by Nate Hamilton

Unfortunately not working

  • Nate Hamilton

    Nate Hamilton

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    Unfortunately not working

    Posted on Mar 18, 2010 at 8:12 AM

    This unfortunately isn't really working for me. I like the colors that you chose, but the swirls are too much. Just focus on keeping this simple and readable.

    • Ezequiel Jaime
      Ezequiel Jaime commented:
      Posted: on Mar 18, 2010 at 9:53 AM

      Thank you Nate, I appreciate your feedback. What about now?

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    • Nate Hamilton
      Nate Hamilton commented:
      Posted: on Mar 18, 2010 at 10:44 AM

      Getting better. I'm still not too fond of the swirlies being inside of the font. Have you tried putting the swirles off to the side or above?

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    • Ezequiel Jaime
      Ezequiel Jaime commented:
      Posted: on Mar 18, 2010 at 1:54 PM

      I want to keep it compact, whenever I can, I try to keep visual an texts together. What do you think about this very last version? I followed your feedback to make it more readable.

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    • Nate Hamilton
      Nate Hamilton commented:
      Posted: on Mar 18, 2010 at 2:08 PM

      Sorry, but to me the swirls are really distracting and make hurt the readability.

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