A Review of Business Card by Rachel Nelson

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  • Rachel Nelson

    Rachel Nelson

    Rank: 3 Superior

    167

    • Design: 3
    • Purpose: 3
    • Originality: 2
    • Engagement: 2
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    Posted on Aug 13, 2009 at 1:02 PM

    Your objective is clean, so to me this has too much detail with the textured black and the watermarked logo.

    I'm a bit confused with your logo as a plus when your company is called minus, it's distracting me from everything else - sorry I had to say.

    The contrast on the red and black doesn't seem good enough but I am viewing on a 10" laptop screen.

    The text on the light side could do with some tweaking not sure what you've done to your contact details but they don't look comfortable like your name and title do.

    I would move the web, branding, print and line much nearer to minus, they look like they are floating at the moment and not really belonging.

    Sorry this is a bit negative compared to your other reviews, but it is how I see it.