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If you're going for the artsy, creepy, aged look I think you hit it. Here are a few of my thoughts though:
- Where the album overlaps the bar looks a little awkward. It's like you tried to center the album on the bar but messed up. Same with the text to the left of it.
- Fad out your gray bars towards the outside.
- You have and edge on your glow texture in the background on the left. Feather that out.
