• Nate Hamilton

    Nate Hamilton

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    • Purpose: 2
    • Originality: 2
    • Engagement: 2
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    Not bad

    Posted on Mar 12, 2010 at 7:48 AM

    This isn't a bad start but there are some things that bother me about this design:

    1. Cut the amount of content.
    2. Make your logo stand out more
    3. Use more line spacing
    4. Pick a different background texture. You can barely tell that you have a texture and when you see it, you're not sure what it is.

    I think these changes will get you on your way to a better design, hope it helps!