A Review of Airport Parking Website Design V2 by Ashim D'silva

body text width

  • Ashim D'silva

    Ashim D'silva

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    body text width

    Posted on Mar 10, 2010 at 6:01 AM

    Nice move from the previous version, although I think you've lost some of the structure that it had. I'd recommend making the body thinner so the lines aren't quite so long; they become hard to read. Also, the background color clashes with the two shades of blue you already have, and isn't a strong enough contrast for the white body text.

    • Alan Horne
      Alan Horne commented:
      Posted: on Mar 10, 2010 at 6:51 AM

      Thanks for the feedback, i have updated a 2nd version for the site, if you could give feedback on that.

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    • Ashim D'silva
      Ashim D'silva commented:
      Posted: on Mar 10, 2010 at 8:04 AM

      Nice. Still think the length of a line in the body copy is too long. 15+ words per line becomes pretty hard to read. You could be generous with a margin on the left, and push the testimonials in from the right so the entire site width is from the logo to the 'contact' link. You'll have to move QuickQuote, copyright and footer links, but might be worth a shot. Might even result in your angled box corners breaking the boundaries and popping off the page more.

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