A Review of portfolio website by Ashim D'silva

Arrangement of the opening line

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    Ashim D'silva

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    Arrangement of the opening line

    Posted on Mar 10, 2010 at 4:27 AM

    Big type can be beautiful, but what becomes important is not just the type but the space created by the varying sizes. You have a lot of different sizes on text, which means the spaces (below 'web', the '& usable' area, space between 'your' and the 'd' of 'needs') all create an odd and unbalanced feeling.

    I'd say definitely change the font for 'creative for your needs' and the jagged line, they stands out significantly as a tacked on extras and interfere with the cleanliness of the rest of the site.