A Review of portfolio website by Anna Funk

Word Grouping

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    Anna Funk

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    Word Grouping

    Posted on Mar 09, 2010 at 2:55 PM

    I love the idea of the big, eye-catching words. There is no way that anyone could take more than just a few seconds to figure out what you do.

    However, I am not reading the words as naturally as they could/should be. Read each line as they are its own idea or sentence.

    "We handcraft clean" "& usable web" "solutions for your needs" (even though it's technically two lines, I do at least read them as one)

    The last line makes complete sense on its own, but the first two don't. If you break up the sentence in a way that leaves each line its own, complete idea, it'll improve readability quite a bit.