A Review of portfolio website by Scott Galloway

I'd consider alternatives for the "we handcraft" text

  • Scott Galloway

    Scott Galloway

    Rank: 10 Newbie

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    • Design: 3
    • Purpose: 3
    • Originality: 2
    • Engagement: 2
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    I like the header and footer treatments; very clean and straightforward.

    However, I find my eyes aren't following the header text very well (i.e. "we handcraft clean & usable..."). My eyes dart around to the higher font sized elements, and have to go back to re-read the full sentence, which appears broken up too much to me. I'd want instead to see perhaps a slightly more linear approach to that text, with maybe not as heavy a hand on the keywords you're calling out (e.g. "handcraft, web solutions, needs")...In terms of color of those keywords, I like the 2nd option, as it reinforces your brand.

    Additionally, I'd like to see a bit more harmony in the layout of the text blocks at the bottom of the page; for example, simply bottom aligning both boxes may help here.