-
You've got a good start here, but it could use some work to make it a nice solution.
First of all, get rid of the silly glare and strokes, they add nothing to your design.
Second, the shining star on the first "O" could be integrated better into the typography. Perhaps it could become the counter of the letter or appear to break the letter instead of sitting on top or behind it. Right now it looks like a cartoon explosion.
