A Review of Doing Business by Nate Hamilton

It works

  • Nate Hamilton

    Nate Hamilton

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    • Design: 3
    • Purpose: 3
    • Originality: 3
    • Engagement: 3
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    It works

    Posted on Mar 04, 2010 at 7:25 AM

    Overall I think this works but the inside feels really segmented and broken up. The colors feel slightly dated and washed out. The imagery also feels like something that you would 10 years ago. I think this works but could be better.

    I'm not sure it's the wisest idea to list a website to explain how to use a website. It seems to work just fine within the brochure.

    • Angie
      Angie commented:
      Posted: on Mar 04, 2010 at 9:16 AM

      Thanks for you feedback. I went back to the drawing board with the layout of the inside. I think it's formatted better now and easier to understand.

      Thanks!

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    • Nate Hamilton
      Nate Hamilton commented:
      Posted: on Mar 04, 2010 at 9:35 AM

      Yeah I do think that looks better. Just move the second column even on the top of the first column.

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