A Review of Parents Conversion Process for Teen Debit Card by Miranda Sehl

overall i think this design is pretty nice. i think your colors are maybe a little too loud. maybe you could just make the edges of the screen a little less green and it might calm things down a bit. if this is for the parents, i think they will want to be calm.. and not alarmed with this idea. your colors are a little alarming. but i do like them. the graphs you have there, maybe make them more pastel or gray instead of super green and blue. i think the dollar sign in the s of "Parent$" is a little cliche but.. it seems like you're past the point of editing the logo. the site is well on its way to completion. all the little details are working together pretty well. after visiting the preview of the live site, i would suggest loosing the pink underlines in the heading, and making some things smaller... good job tho, keep going~