A Review of Humane Society Campaign v1 by Joel Glovier

the puppy needs some breathing room around the video box

  • Joel Glovier

    Joel Glovier

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    Not bad what you have so far. I think it needs some of those little touches. Like perhaps try a very subtle gradient spotlight effect from the top left corner. Maybe a subtle border around the video box. And def give that dog some breathing room between his chin and the video box. The header feels kinda empty to me, too. Hope that helps.

    • Noel Tock
      Noel Tock commented:
      Posted: on Mar 01, 2010 at 3:07 PM

      Thanks Joel, really solid comments there, I'll try some of those things out...