A Review of Personal logo by Fenson Jeremy

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    Fenson Jeremy

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    Posted on Feb 27, 2010 at 12:59 AM

    The text is fine so I'd do more work on the mark.

    Somthing just doesn't feel right and I think it's the colors. They just don't 'pop'. I also think that stroke of the box is little too think. Maybe lessen it about 1 or 2 pixels? Try experimenting with the golden proportion on that one.