A Review of Theme Force v1 by Zeno Popovici

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  • Zeno Popovici

    Zeno Popovici

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    • Design: 3
    • Purpose: 3
    • Originality: 2
    • Engagement: 2
    2 Votes
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    Posted on Feb 25, 2010 at 11:59 AM

    Hey there Noel,

    1. I would firstly cut down on text. You're trying to put everything on the home page. Just put the essentials and move other text to secondary pages.
    2. The 2 products have no specifics, no information on how they are different, don't look like the're meant for a browser environment. Nate had some good ideas there.
    3. I would go with Demo, Get it now action buttons.
    4. The top menu is not visible enough, and there is no separation between the menu and the rest of the page, it's also clashes with the text logo you have there. 5.The content is OK, but again, cut down on text, include some relevant icons for each section, try to build it on 3 colums ... dunno.
    5. There is no footer :) ... could be used for navigation or other useful stuff.
    6. The contact form occupies a big amount of space without being really needed there. You can make it in a different format, minimal, or move it to another page.
    • Noel Tock
      Noel Tock commented:
      Posted: on Feb 25, 2010 at 3:11 PM

      Hi Graffino, thanks for the kind comments. I think I've changed almost all your points except footer in this latest version...

      Cheers