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I'm going to have to side with Yitz on this one. The H should probably be changed to a capital. I first read it as ARTBROW. (made me think Highbrow Art)
I do, however, appreciate the concept and the creativity. This is a really inspiring piece.
I'd stick with the first set, and perhaps give it some dimension...? who knows.
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Nice work, and I agree with the posts above that the lower case "h" appears as a "b" with the dot in it. Either remove the dot or make the "h" uppercase