A Review of Baldu Kids by Daniel Pataki

Slightly less fat

  • Daniel Pataki

    Daniel Pataki

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    Slightly less fat

    Posted on Feb 24, 2010 at 1:43 AM

    Hi Demi! Upon looking at the review by Jon, I'd use the version he has attached with the different D on kids.

    Otherwise, I like the overall feel of the logo. However, it does give me the feeling of "designer stuff for kids" as opposed to "kids stuff for designers", but this is not my area of specialty, so I may be completely off here.

    One thing I would change is make it ever so slightly less fat. While clear, I find the "u" and "s" a bit too chunky.

    One more option you could look into is making the "k" in kids curve in a bit. the a in "Baldu" follows the upper curve of the be, so the outline of the "k" in kids could slightly follow the concave curve of the bottom part of the "B". This might add some more flow into the design.

    Hope I could help!

    • Demi Livshits
      Demi Livshits commented:
      Posted: on Feb 24, 2010 at 4:04 AM

      Thank You, Daniel! I'll try to improve it and make the lowercase less fat.