A Review of Personal Website and Freelance by Miranda Sehl

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  • Miranda Sehl

    Miranda Sehl

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    • Design: 3
    • Purpose: 3
    • Originality: 4
    • Engagement: 3
    1 Vote
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    Posted on Aug 11, 2009 at 10:06 AM

    ben, your name is looking better than the jamin thing you had before! i agree that the current projects bubble and the portfolio window need to match. the portfolio box has a cool effect, and the current projects bubble is also a neat style.. but you need to go with one or the other. i would like to see evidence of you drawing this out on paper, instead of just constructing it on the computer. it seems very digitally driven. its good sometimes to completely draw it out on paper. your navigation bar seems like it could follow the uphill slant of the roof, instead of creating another angled line at the top. also, i think the "follow me on twitter" should stay on the about me page, and not clutter up the main menu. its good to have a simplistic website, so people can focus and really get a good look at your work. i like your effort, keep going with it

    • Stefan Drakulich
      Stefan Drakulich commented:
      Posted: on Aug 11, 2009 at 10:33 AM

      He can always, have a twitter feed in the footer, but just not that huge up top. That's all. Keep it on the About Me page.

      Well said miranda.