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  • jeff king

    jeff king

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    Too busy

    Posted on Aug 11, 2009 at 9:57 AM

    Too busy. Less is more. Use less text. more space between columns

    • Rachel Nelson
      Rachel Nelson commented:
      Posted: on Aug 11, 2009 at 12:37 PM

      Less is more is my mantra, but I have already cut a lot of the supplied text.

      The document is 6pp not columns, more space will just squash the text more.

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