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1st one made the most positivie impression on me. I'm particularly fond of the colours and typeface(for name) you chose for this concept. They make the concept outstanding. However, the placement of name and tagline seem to be a drawback for this concept. Maybe a way around this could be placing name, surname, and tagline above each other separately next to the graphic.
Probably someone else has a better idea about this. Do whatever you want to do with the placement of elements, but don't blend the graphic into the text nor change the colours and typeface.
good luck.
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Metin Ucar commented:you know sometimes we designers like to create letters out of shapes. here I wanted to advice that trying square shape as letter will not make any good for this concept. hope this helps. good luck mate.
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Thank you! Sorry because my english isn't that good, but what did you mean with "blend the graphic into the text"?