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nice logo, i think the 2nd is the best. I feel the main-typo is a bit to thick, it takes too much attention.
are you planning to have a single-colour version as well?
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Magnus Fossum commented:I think you should have a centered and a 'original' version of the logo. There may be occasions where the print-area is smaller, so to maintain the logo size you might wanna have an alternate version. I also have got more used to the font-size and is not much of a deal anymore :)
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I think the type is alright. The problem is the box on the left. See if you feel it better with the box on the center.