A Review of Valentines advent calendar by Benjamin Charity

The silhouettes

  • Benjamin Charity

    Benjamin Charity

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    • Engagement: 4
    2 Votes
    The silhouettes

    Posted on Feb 17, 2010 at 12:26 PM

    The logo is well done and so is the background.

    I would go very dark with the silhouettes and ground. Try to sort of embed it into the design, sinking it deep into the background. I know that may sound a bit vague. But right now it sort of blinds me when I look at it, when the focus should be on the calendar itself. It should be more background, evoking emotion, not drawing attention.

    Welcome to CF!

    • Ashley Temple
      Ashley Temple commented:
      Posted: on Feb 17, 2010 at 1:58 PM

      I see what you mean, thanks for taking the time to comment, I agree that i should blend the image and background while making the calendar stand out more. Cheers