A Review of Layout advertising archives talks - revised by Michael Hagstrom

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  • Michael Hagstrom

    Michael Hagstrom

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    Posted on Aug 10, 2009 at 7:13 PM

    Simplify this sucker up.

    Theres way to much going on, it needs to be broken up so it can quickly be read and scanned for important information.

    • Rachel Nelson
      Rachel Nelson commented:
      Posted: on Aug 11, 2009 at 12:29 PM

      If you'd seen how much text I've already cut out, you would see the compromise.

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