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Hi Vivek,
I like your concept here. What a great idea having the door at the bottom and viewing things from this perspective.
I would only consider adjusting a few things. The one, two, three and four, look different in color due to it's background. So, maybe making them white and pulling back the price color would be more ideal. Since you are trying to pull more attention to what you offer rather than the cost.
I would also consider left aligning your text block under "Logo Design Studio" unless, if you want to go in there and push those words closer together to each other (and change words so hyphens are not everywhere when you do so.) As it currently is, the gaps create rivers (gaps of space seen flowing down your text block, when you squint your eyes.) Also, the space created between the words stops the smooth flow of reading. Then to try and not have a word by itself at the end of a paragraph.
Maybe consider a different capret/background. This one reminds me of victorian wallpaper. As shag carpet relates to the 60's, you're sending a subtle message to your customers through its selection. I think the pattern on the carpet throws the perspective off a bit.
I like the steam coming from the coffee. Yet, the pencils seem very flat behind "NEED A LOGO?" area.
