A Review of Personal Branding/Logo for Freelance by Rachel Ortiz

To read as "Benjamin" instead of "jamin"

  • Rachel Ortiz

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    To read as "Benjamin" instead of "jamin"

    Posted on Aug 10, 2009 at 3:40 PM

    I would change the orientation so that "Ben" is read first. As it is, "jamin" is dominant and what is read first. Also, Charity is too small in relation to the other elements. If reproduced at a very small size, "Charity" would not be readable. Hope this helps.

    • Benjamin Charity
      Benjamin Charity commented:
      Posted: on Aug 10, 2009 at 5:36 PM

      I uploaded a third image that is rotated so that Ben and Charity are read first, but 'jamin' is still present. I want to somehow keep 'Charity' a bit smaller because I want the focus to be on my first name, due to the fact that Charity has so many other uses. Does the new orientation work better?

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    • Rachel Ortiz
      Rachel Ortiz commented:
      Posted: on Aug 11, 2009 at 10:17 AM

      Yes, this orientation works much better, but to get a better balance, and to maintain readability at small sizes, it would be best to enlarge Charity somewhat. Overall, much better. But keep in mind that the details will be completely lost at small sizes.

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