A Review of Personal Logo by Michelle Rauh

I like this but look at your spacing where the read meats art director and at the bottom. The ration of spaces seems a little strange. I would suggest playing with a little more. If your making the red L's not line up perfectly with text and each then make it more obvious. If you are not intending that then you need to it clean up. The right L doesn't line up with felix and it looks to me that the top doesn't easier could just be my eyes but double check.