A Review of Website design for synchronise.org.uk by Rachel Nelson

the hyphens

  • Rachel Nelson

    Rachel Nelson

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    the hyphens

    Posted on Aug 10, 2009 at 6:24 AM

    This feels very zen to me. My pet hate is dashes and I think the we bits would look better without them. As far as layout goes it is very clear. The subheading beginning coaching needs lining up it looks a little odd indented without the body text indented.

    I think it probably fits the style of your client from images she took.

    • Zeno Popovici
      Zeno Popovici commented:
      Posted: on Aug 10, 2009 at 6:45 AM

      You're right ... the look should be "zen" (not Zeno) :D. Yep, the dashes are annoying. Let me see if I convince her to drop them in our next update.

      She wanted the subheading indented ... you're right it's odd. i'll try talking her out of it.

      Thanks :)

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