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as some say, big problems with typography :
- 'A' doesn't look like a
- transitions between letters are quite awful (especially between 'A' and 'l', 'l' and 'e', 'e' and 'c', 'n' and 'e', 'e' and 's') : it breaks the hand written feeling.
- letter 'c' seems to be "serif'd"
concerning the subtext 'pottery artist', i feel that artist is too much on the right, and letter spacing seems a little bit exagerated.
