A Review of Personal Branding/Logo for Freelance by Angela Koch

Bring Charity to the fore

  • Angela Koch

    Angela Koch

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    • Design: 4
    • Purpose: 2
    • Originality: 2
    • Engagement: 4
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    Bring Charity to the fore

    Posted on Aug 10, 2009 at 12:16 AM

    I have no issue with the type style. My issue is how the viewer receives your name. Your most memorable asset is your surname "Charity". Its highly original and is evocative. I would exploit this more. Your current logo first places emphasis on jamin (most legible) then Ben (large type) and finally on Charity. My recommendation is the reverse of what you currently have

    • Benjamin Charity
      Benjamin Charity commented:
      Posted: on Aug 10, 2009 at 1:03 AM

      This is true. Thank you. I guess as a guy I have gotten into the habit of shying away from my last name growing us as it can be a female first name. :) I guess I need to embrace it!

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    • Marius Stuparu
      Marius Stuparu commented:
      Posted: on Aug 11, 2009 at 10:03 AM

      Why be ashamed? It's your name, nothing silly about it.

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