• Joseph Dougherty

    Joseph Dougherty

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    Body text

    Posted on Feb 07, 2010 at 10:39 PM

    As said earlier, body text is a little voluminous and in my opinion may be a little small and perhaps even a little too light. Larger text with key points, possibly a little darker on the bright white background. Overall I like it!

    • Digital
      Digital commented:
      Posted: on Feb 07, 2010 at 11:16 PM

      thanks,

      yes you are right, as it is not clear which texts will go into home..hence we just placed a dummy texts. Hopefully when we get the actual texts, then we could arrange as you suggested.