• Andy E

    Andy E

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    font

    Posted on Feb 03, 2010 at 2:46 PM

    This has the potential to look high-end, but the font doesn't fit. It looks like a very basic typewriter font. I think you need something fancier, similar to (but more unique) the font used in Salon and Spa. Then, tighten up the kerning.

    I think I'd use the same solid stroke for the divider as the one used in the flower.

    • Danelle Bailey
      Danelle Bailey commented:
      Posted: on Feb 04, 2010 at 9:49 AM

      Thanks Andy, I'm already working on an updated version with this consideration applied. I appreciate your time!