• Nate Hamilton

    Nate Hamilton

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    Great start

    Posted on Feb 03, 2010 at 2:37 PM

    This is a great direction, here's a few things:

    1. The divider is pretty distracting. Try to choose a divider that is less distracting and more elegant...maybe even just a thin solid line.
    2. If there is any way that you can extend salon & spa or shorten Leo's on chocolate, I would.

    Great work so far though, keep it up!

    • Danelle Bailey
      Danelle Bailey commented:
      Posted: on Feb 03, 2010 at 2:42 PM

      Great suggestions. Nate. I really appreciate you taking a look! I'll work on this.