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my first impression was that it was good, but something was bothering me, and upon closer inspection, i think it's the fact that it's not symetrical, which is fine, but this doesn't look like it is assymetrical on purpose, more just like an accident, i would fix that and see how it does. you might also try a superscript or something like that, on the "on" in the name.
You are correct. I meant part of this to look "something" like a butterfly and it is done purposely that way. I did not want a same-old perfectly symmetrical flower. I am currently working on it standing out more so this proves that the contrast needed work. Thank you!