• Robert Tipping

    Robert Tipping

    Rank: 4 Master

    1094

    • Design: 3
    • Purpose: 2
    • Originality: 1
    • Engagement: 1
    1 Vote
    very wordy

    Posted on Jan 30, 2010 at 10:03 AM

    I would say on first impact this is very wordy and therefore a little daunting.

    Your first three column (feature )breakouts could have more meaning full icon type graphics break down the words or even replace words as section headers. I would be tempted to go more sensational link than wordy explanation on home page .

    i belief a branding icon (logo picture is perhaps necessary) for what I am assuming is a school/college/university demographic.

    In short reads like a mid term paper rather than a fun challenge.

    • Robert Tipping
      Robert Tipping commented:
      Posted: on Jan 30, 2010 at 10:07 AM

      Ok I am confused I could not get on the link before review know I can and most of what I mention here is implemented on the site. What is it you want reviewed ? the link or the concept media image featured here.?

    • sameer bhatia
      sameer bhatia commented:
      Posted: on Jan 31, 2010 at 12:39 PM

      Thank you Robert. Design is iterative. We are working on a new iterating and doing some much due clean up. We will make the images better and bigger. Reducing word coutn as well.