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I like the idea of roughing up the figures to make them work better with the type. I don't like the imbalance ... the scale of the type doesn't fit well with the figures.
Be sure to try the logo concepts in some applications. Think about how it will be used. Will it have to be reproduced in a very small size... or very large? How will it relate to the design of a poster, bus bench, T-shirt, whatever.
It this your headline or a logo? Will it contribute to a layout or hamper it?
