A Review of First Web Comic by Joel Glovier

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  • Joel Glovier

    Joel Glovier

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    • Design: 2
    • Purpose: 3
    • Originality: 3
    • Engagement: 1
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    Posted on Jan 27, 2010 at 4:49 PM

    The apple icon is confusing - it looks like it could be a mouse, or a pear.

    The illustration needs some tlc. Nice concept, but I'm not sure I understand it.

    • Husien Adel
      Husien Adel commented:
      Posted: on Jan 27, 2010 at 5:18 PM

      well if it your first try it's not bad but keep going to read and know the latest vector & illustration techniques to be more telnet & creative , good luck

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    • Carlos Lopes
      Carlos Lopes commented:
      Posted: on Jan 27, 2010 at 6:18 PM

      Yeah, the apple logo looks like a pear. I don't know if it's intended to be this way...

      Try to add more colours and it will look very nice as a comic design.

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