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shaun, you've created a very popular concept. the name is short & sweet, and to the point. i read through many other posts, and didn't seem to find anyone else that thought the e on the end looks a bit odd. the first e has reason for being incomplete.. because it is being covered up by the "d" curve. but the last e seems like it should just look lowercase natural.. with a connected center and top, or even a complete circle with a horizontal line through it.
i agree with eric that the letter connections are all doing something different, and it would be stronger to unify their style. ..by either pulling them all apart, just barely connecting all of them or overlapping all. the d and g might have trouble overlapping and still looking separate... i see the struggle.
im excited for all the possibilities you have with this..! by printing it right on the EDGE of your business cards, and letterhead.. you'll need to bleed off the side! i hope you utilize the edge of the paper~ whether its folded or cut.. or the edge of web browsers, or show it printed and photographed if its being shown online~ it has beautiful possibilities.. i tried making the "e" complete, hope you dont mind, its a fun shape to work with!
i think the g getting cut off is great. but instead of tucking it into a pocket... i think it should be cut off.. as if on the edge of the paper... you could cut off the last e too.. could do different things with it, very versatile :)
