• Vlad Verde

    Vlad Verde

    Rank: 4 Master

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    • Engagement: 4
    1 Vote
    Spacing

    Posted on Jan 27, 2010 at 9:56 AM

    I see 2 things than can go in a better direction in the 3rd design.

    1. Spacing. The horizontal spacing is too small compared to the verical one. I am talking about the Z inside the red rectangle

    2. The Z inside the rectangle should be the same as the one used in "ziarul". Or if you want them different, you could try a sans-seriffs font for the type.

    Hope this helps.

    • Zeno Popovici
      Zeno Popovici commented:
      Posted: on Jan 27, 2010 at 10:51 AM
      1. It's not supposed to be a square.
      2. I somewhat agree, tough i think we should use a serif font because it's a "newspaper"

      Thanks for your suggestions Vlad, Cheers, Z.